Kabuto's "Little Kaduki Girls to Kaduki Woman", Keeping the white van away from your house, on actor at a time! Options

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i actually think attempt 2 is not bad at all

btw remember art for anime etc is often stylized.. so once you settle on a style even if its a tad weird ppl will get used to it just make sure there's clear definitions between the male and female i agree the first edit looked male the second attempt looked good imho

there's one very popular anime artist that doesn't put any noses on anyone not even the little dash like line noses for example

for refrence might want to look at the characters from clanned vs clannad after story you can see the same chars school aged vs adults its a very fine line.