Ember Options

[ashtoban]

Ember is an fire elemental who used to be a human before she was trapped in a orb by Rei. She is an over-emotional hot head who is very persistent and will never give up on a goal. She is very powerful and can use swords and fire orbs. Ember has a very unique bond with her sisters and is able to sense whenever they are using their powers. Ember doesn't know much about her past as a human but as an Fire Elemental she purses the title of the "The Strongest Flame" and is constantly boasting her pure power. When she is at her fullest power she turns a blue color, and when she is at her weakest she is an violet-red color.(If any one thinks my character is flawed please give me some suggestions, because I'm kinda new at this.) Here is an Rpg maker Xp sprite of Ember's human form :  EmberHumanfemale.png ( 7.18K ) Number of downloads: 0
and here is a picture of her Elemental form:  083_Elemental01.png ( 5.25K ) Number of downloads: 0


This post has been edited by ashtoban: Oct 4 2012, 05:35 PM

[Shaddow]

It is not so much of your character being flawed or not, it's more of a lack of information. It seems pretty interesting in concept, yet we know so little about the world or the characters personality, what she looks like, age, likes, dislikes, things of that nature. You can improve this a lot by adding in some of that information, to help flesh out the character, also maybe some information on who the other people mentioned are would help too.

You've left a lot to our imaginations, which isn't always a bad thing, but in this case we know nothing else to compare too, so we cannot get a good picture of what the character is like. If you'd like I can provide a kind of template that gives you some basic info which is useful to fill out for your characters to show them to other people.

[ashtoban]

It is not so much of your character being flawed or not, it's more of a lack of information. It seems pretty interesting in concept, yet we know so little about the world or the characters personality, what she looks like, age, likes, dislikes, things of that nature. You can improve this a lot by adding in some of that information, to help flesh out the character, also maybe some information on who the other people mentioned are would help too.

You've left a lot to our imaginations, which isn't always a bad thing, but in this case we know nothing else to compare too, so we cannot get a good picture of what the character is like. If you'd like I can provide a kind of template that gives you some basic info which is useful to fill out for your characters to show them to other people.

I will put the information in a list and I will also have add some pictures.

This post has been edited by ashtoban: Oct 4 2012, 05:22 PM