Rescuing Devan[Short Game] Options

[chigoo]

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Story

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Rescuing Devan is a classic save the princes story.
One day a kidnapper come to your home in the grove
and kidnaps your girl friend, now it is up to you and your
good friend rose, to save her. Your goal is to reach the kidnappers house and rescue your girl friend. While on your journey
you will encounter different kinds of monsters
Grunts, ghosts, and mini bosses. Will you save your girl friend and finally live in peace in your grove house, or will the kidnapper defeat you and ruing your chance of being with your girl friend, or will something else happen?

World

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The game takes place in an imaginary forest with 4 citizens
The first two citizens are of course your self and the kidnapper
The other two are the grunts that terrorize the forest. When you reach the the kidnappers house you will meet another citizen of the world,
Which are ghost will you run for your life, or face these though enemies with your lighten attacks?

Characters

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Emmanuel- A brave young man who has just discovered love only for her to be taken away time after time.

Devan- The girl you are trying to save.

Rose- Hard Headed girl that loves to mess with you.

Kidnapper- Enjoys kidnapping girls

Grunt1- A bandit that terrorizes the forest with his sword

Grunt2- a bandit that terrorizes the forest with his gun

Ghost- A ghost that lives in the dark cave behind the kidnappers house they are weak against lighten so use lighten moves when you face them.

Mini bosses
1-the boss in the cave
2-the boss in the hole by the river

Screen Shot

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After the boss at the bridge rose will disappear but will still be in your party(done intensionally)

Cheat==================
if you want to use the cheat you will have to defeat the two mini bosses to get the password to open the superpower code
with this you can beat the final boss easy cause its kinda hard if your not prepared for it.

the two mini bosses are hard to kill do heres the password if you want the easy way out
Password to get the super power code is: 1994
Password to open the super power is: 11111111

Guide to defeating the finial boss without cheat.
kill grunts to get potions
and explore the whole forest map to obtain scrolls and the dropped potions


Credit

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RPG Tankentai SBS v3.3
By Enu
English Translation by Kylock

Sideview Battle System Configurations
(English Translation v2.3)
v1.6 - v2.1 Translation by Mr Bubble
Translation Help by Shu

Chest Item Pop-Up
Author : OriginalWij

MOG_BATTLEBACK_XP V1.0
by Moghunter


Thomas Edison VX
Version: 0.1
Author: BulletXt

Catterpillar Script
By:Trickster

Tile Set
Character set

forgot who made the resources i use i have tons of them and from diffrent people and this was made a while ago.

so if you see you work in my game leave a comment.

This post has been edited by chigoo: Jul 15 2010, 01:13 PM

[Scriptless]

spelling mistakes, lame fight scene characters aren't detailed enough, I can go on for a whole hour.

[chigoo]

lame fight scenes, characters aren't detailed enough. I can go on for a whole hour.

its a short game
and how awesome can the fight scenes get?
the game take about 15mins to complete it.



This post has been edited by chigoo: Jul 14 2010, 09:24 AM

[Scriptless]

You got to be kidding me.

[Rob_Riv]

You really need to sort out the poor spelling and grammar.

[chigoo]

You really need to sort out the poor spelling and grammar.

i thought i fix all the spelling errors O.O
must have uploaded the wrong file

edit:

yep i uploaded the wrong file.
putting up the right one now.

[PJammaz]

There are still plenty of spelling mistakes. Right off the bat, rescuing is spelled wrong on the title page.
"I love you some much."
"I love u too."
"Im ganna Kidnapp your girl friend for no reason."
I could go on and on, but almost every sentence has that error.

It is also probably bad form to start off saying something to people who don't like the game. You are basically setting people up to not like it, immediately before it starts.

I thought it was kind of funny that you could see what every single thing was called by pressing z on it, if a little unnecessary.

The grunts are a little repetitive. There are a lot of them, so it might be nice if they were a little more varied.

I know that you said Rose is supposed to disappear, but why? That doesn't make any sense.

Anyway...
I know it is discouraging to see stuff like this, but don't let it get you down. Try to read tutorials on everything you can: mapping, events, story-telling, characters and so on. Also, try to read up on your grammar, because that can be a real mood breaker for many games.

[Reshiram//Exe]

My Reaction:


Due to the spelling errors and the overall bland story,Is the reason. Is that better?

~Uh, no. Rather than that why not say why you didn't like the game or what caused that reaction? Try not to spam.
-Harry

This post has been edited by Phantsmal: Jul 24 2010, 04:40 PM

Reason for edit: Spam

[Ratty524]

... LOL?


This is just killing me. What the hell kind of fight sequence is this? I would have even preferred the defeualt battle effects over this.

Your storyline and characters are as descriptive as the instruction booklet of Super Mario Bros. 2. That is, it's barely informative.

What's the hero's personality, history, etc.? What about the rest of them? Oh and seriously, "Kidnapper" and "Grunt"? I can't see why you didn't bother to name them.

The only excuse I see you have for this is that you want gameplay to be a focus, but it doesn't even look like you even thought much about creating a fun, unique type of game to begin with. Aside from the battle script, everything looks pretty default and bland.

Keep in mind, however, that this is only my first impression, to which you've already set to be bad with your spelling/grammar mistakes, lack of a description on features and story, and overall just a bland presentation.

In addition, there is something I don't understand about your story from the start: The forest this takes place is imaginary? Are the characters all dreaming this, or what?