my music :P Options

[SloaTheDemon]

this is where i put my songs and such into here for any future games or gmes im currntly wroking on, ill have all the one that are free here too just PM me the name of the song and ill reply w/ the link. Have fun listening.

songs

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Beautiful Darkness
Among the darkness
Taste of blood
Nowhere is safe
Big shot
Haven

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http://www.rpgrevolution.com/forums/index....showtopic=54689

This post has been edited by SloaTheDemon: Jan 8 2012, 11:31 AM

[TTrain427]

I'm liking the new songs man.

[SloaTheDemon]

thanks man, im really glad you do, i'll try and base my stuff more around. I guess its bc i'm more of a rock/metal musician was the reason it cam out so good lol

[Jens of Zanicuud]

I heared from the songs again and understood what made my first comment so rude.
First two themes were quite monotonous (i.e. same melodic line all over the time, without significant variations), despite good use of effects and reverb, while the newest two are more various, well structured and are worth a shot:)
I'm a fan of metal music, and these two new songs are amazingly doom-metal oriented, in my opinion...
Dark, gloomy and almost scary, especially Nowhere is Safe.
Taste of Blood bass lines remember me Muse's Time is Running Out intro, while guitar track reminds FFX Otherworld.
Amazingly brutal:)
I feel that Taste of Blood could be used in a special battle, while Nowhere is Safe would be perfect for a Haunted Mansion or something like this...
These are major improvement, I really like this new style:)

Jens

[SloaTheDemon]

thank you, wow lol. U just really made my day, i decided to go ahead stick with the metal feel. What inspired taste of blood was this tutorial i watched o nhow to make a heavy metal track on FL studios, so i basicly toke what he showed me rearranged it to my liking and then layered it . Those tracks were both simple but apparently good tracks, since everyone seems to be enjoying them i've decided to still with the metal ish style on my music. Anyway thanks for the feedback and i hope u like my others i nthe future

[Jens of Zanicuud]

I've heard to your new song Big Shot...
Actually, I think it's not bad, but the main theme is repeated too much times and makes it monotonous.
Try to variate more and to add some different theme in the same song.
I hope my innate criticism won't bother you too much, but I prefer being direct rather than give false compliments.
If it can help you, I found that repetition was the worst problem in the first two songs you posted (before your metal conversion - all hail Iron Maiden!).
Try to hear something from Kamelot, Anathema, Evanescence or Nightwish. I think they could inspire you in creating some oppressive, atmosferic metal theme...

Jens

This post has been edited by Jens of Zanicuud: Jan 4 2012, 12:05 PM

[SloaTheDemon]

thank you and im rally glad for direct feedback bad or good i don't want someone same its good bc they don't wanna hurt my feelings bc it just shows me how im improving and where i might have messed up on a like u just said about big shot, hoenstly that one i didn't do very well like i did with taste of blood and nowhere is safe and i thouht i had put fight to the death on here too. I'll make sur to add that one also so u can see what u think on that one. But i will go back and work on big shot ^.^ again i really glad for the truthful and direct feedback