Im back with some art!, New vs old Options

[kaz]

Not bad at all - The area that needs looking at is the hands and feet-they are too small for her torso, and you would see more of her butt if she was sat at that angle- to the right side. ( difficult to explain what I mean in words)

The drawn up leg is a little too close to her body- if you sit and try and recreate the pose in front of the mirror you would see what I mean.

The colour tone is lovely and the hair, plus the face looking at you at a slight angle I like.

[X-M-O]

Looking good, though I'd agree with what kaz has already mentioned. ^^
I'd like to add though that her back would be curved a bit more if she is sitting on the floor in that position; unless she is leaning up against a wall, in which case her back wouldn't curve in the way you've currently drawn it to curve.

[Lato]

AHH feedback! , yeah im still trying to get the hand of hands and feet, mostly just getting there size right, she was sitting on the bed so the impression she left kinda hid some of the hands and feet, I probly should have drawled the bed to but i didnt want to lose focus on her.

[X-M-O]

Ah ok. ^^
Just notice that if she's sitting on a bed (and not leaning up against a bed post, etc.) that she would sink into the bed just slightly and that would cause her to hunch over a bit more (unless she isn't in a relaxed position, but she looks a little relaxed here so I'd say she should be a little more hunched over).