His grip on the weapon is a very poor choice regardless if it's for an offensive or defensive attack.
I suggest reworking the hands to give it an "in motion" look rather than a charging stance. Also, the cross guard should be ined up with the wrist closest to the top of the hilt. This keeps the blade angled properly for slashing strokes. And the hands should both be at the top of the hilt (offensive) or one at the top and one at the bottom of the hilt (defensive)
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Kitten looks about that age. She's designed fairly well and has a "plain-Jane" outfit, and the flower is a nice affect that looks cute on kids. =] Is she supposed to be in a game or something?
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QUOTE (X-M-O @ Nov 18 2010, 10:23 AM)
Kitten looks about that age. She's designed fairly well and has a "plain-Jane" outfit, and the flower is a nice affect that looks cute on kids. =] Is she supposed to be in a game or something?
Her tibia looks twice longer than her femur, while the femur is the longer bone in the human body. Even considering a stylistic deformation it still looks weird. Colors are very good. Don't hide the hands, you lazy man...
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Kitten Finished
Done. I think the skirt could use a bit of improvement but it's fine as is imo. For my first CG pic with Paint Tool SAI, I think I did 'iight. I purposely washed the colours. I'm not sure if the head is too big or if it's just the length of her neck.
I see you fixed the legs pretty good. The neck has problems with positioning and shape, more than the lenght or the head size. The shading of the nose look a bit weird.
Those are only small things tho, the whole picture looks amazing.
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QUOTE (leongon @ Nov 19 2010, 02:05 PM)
I see you fixed the legs pretty good. The neck has problems with positioning and shape, more than the lenght or the head size. The shading of the nose look a bit weird.
Those are only small things tho, the whole picture looks amazing.
That's very good, no doubt. Not sure if it's me right now but. The neck might look a little too long. Other than that. It's all very good, keep up the great work of art!
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Lol. Looks like Pit just got a rival (drools all over the keyboard)
*Huh?* Oh, sorry.
The angel pic is pretty well done! I can't wait to see what it looks like when it's done, and I love Kitten! Probably because I knew somebody who had rainbow stockings who used to go to my high school. Nice stuff!
Leon's Basic VX Scripts of Awesome: Step 1. Passive Skills- Create skills that add passive bonuses. (shitty) Step 2. Learning from Everyone- Learn skills from enemies, or allies, without being the target of the skill. (nice) Step 3. Dual Battle Landscapes- Set background and foreground image for your battles. (nice) Step 4. State Details- Add description to states, and allow viewing them on menu, and in battle. (nice) Step 5. Item Quality Colors - Colourize item, weapon, armor and skill's name according their quality or affinity. (very nice) Step 6. Skill Trees- Your actors can have talent trees now, like in the MMORPGs. (extremely nice) Step 7. Main Menu Manager- Easy, straight, and intuitive total control of commands for the main menu. (very nice) Drawing commissions are open. Facesets... monsters... anything: click here.
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Excellent job on the warrior angel! How big are his wings going to be by the time he's completed? =D (Will you be making a female warrior angel counterpart?)
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QUOTE (Brent Murray @ Nov 20 2010, 09:17 PM)
Lol. Looks like Pit just got a rival (drools all over the keyboard)
ARGH! XD
QUOTE (X-M-O @ Nov 21 2010, 06:10 PM)
Excellent job on the warrior angel! How big are his wings going to be by the time he's completed? =D (Will you be making a female warrior angel counterpart?)
I could do a female counterpart down the line maybe lol. The Wings are decorative (ironic cause he's clearly dead) I believe, not sure. Either way I'm digging small wings compared to big large ones.
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