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[akura]

My Beanies :3 You can use them for VX : D

[kayden997]

BEANS!!!!!!

[akura]

BEANS!!!!!!

*LAUGHS* XD yeah :3 I loved his character so I made my own check my thread kay, I posed Poses for them xD I'm making a special skill actor picture for Popsicle LMAO

[Jens of Zanicuud]

Hi everyone, I need a feedback on this BGM.
Is it suitable as a battle BGM?

 Fighting_Alone.mid ( 36.44K ) Number of downloads: 16


And this one?

 Danse_Macabre.mid ( 49.41K ) Number of downloads: 9


Created by me with TuxGuitar.
Free use, just credit and comment.

I'm a rough composer, I know, but I'd like to know what do you think of them...

Thanks in advance.

Jens

This post has been edited by Jens of Zanicuud: Feb 29 2012, 01:14 PM

[Yuu-Mon Musuedo]

Hi everyone, I need a feedback on this BGM.
Is it suitable as a battle BGM?

 Fighting_Alone.mid ( 36.44K ) Number of downloads: 16


And this one?

 Danse_Macabre.mid ( 49.41K ) Number of downloads: 9


Created by me with TuxGuitar.
Free use, just credit and comment.

I'm a rough composer, I know, but I'd like to know what do you think of them...

Thanks in advance.

Jens

The "Fighting Alone" sounds more like a hero is fighting his way through or taking a trial. It doesn't sound like it could be used for a main battle theme to me though. It sounds like it could fit in a dungeon as well.

Now "Danse Macabre" sounds more of a battle theme. Seem like it can be used for a boss battle or a regular encounter theme.

[-dah0rst-]

A new screenshot from my bumpmap script- I tried it with different sorts of (modified) RTP textures... as I can't boost the performance anymore (realtime will never happen T.T), I will next work on a script for Voxel like fog

[Jens of Zanicuud]

Hi everyone, I need a feedback on this BGM.
Is it suitable as a battle BGM?

 Fighting_Alone.mid ( 36.44K ) Number of downloads: 16


And this one?

 Danse_Macabre.mid ( 49.41K ) Number of downloads: 9


Created by me with TuxGuitar.
Free use, just credit and comment.

I'm a rough composer, I know, but I'd like to know what do you think of them...

Thanks in advance.

Jens

The "Fighting Alone" sounds more like a hero is fighting his way through or taking a trial. It doesn't sound like it could be used for a main battle theme to me though. It sounds like it could fit in a dungeon as well.

Now "Danse Macabre" sounds more of a battle theme. Seem like it can be used for a boss battle or a regular encounter theme.

Fighting Alone was actually used as the main battle theme in Tryadine Effect (i.e. the project I'm working on), even if it wasn't originally designed for this. I found it rather good (in my opinion) and employed it, since it seemed to fit the game. Danse Macabre was meant to be a battle theme from the beginning, but never used it. If someone is interested in using it, just PM me. I'd like to hear it in action

Thanks for the comments

Jens

[MrGuy0250]

Hello people, I'd like some feedback on a piece I just wrote. It's for "Aevum: The Ancient's Song" by Lydyn (he's looking for a team still so anyone looking for work should go look :3). It's a battle theme for the 1st chapter, which takes place during a war, a rebel rebellion to be exact. That in mind, I tried writing it at a march tempo and being brass heavy to give it a militaristic kind of feel. What I want to know is if I did it effectively... thank you for your feedback

http://soundcloud.com/emfb-music-1/sets/ae...ents-song-music

[akura]

I give you my Dark Mage Beanie :3

[Holder]

Progress on an animated battler request:

(Magic casting pose -The one with the swishing hand- has no casting animation intentionally)

[akura]

Progress on an animated battler request:

(Magic casting pose -The one with the swishing hand- has no casting animation intentionally)

That looks awesome Holder : o

[Resource Dragon]

I've got a little screenie of some tilesets I have just recently sprited. (All tiles from scratch, except the link sprite)
Click the image for no blur;
 ebo1.png ( 10.23K ) Number of downloads: 43


So far, i've hard-coded(In C++) the statue to flash every 1-5 secs, and throw a fireball in my direction. The link sprite
is just an example of the player.

It isn't really a screenshot, I'm looking for critique on the Tileset.

[supercow]

@resource dragon: nice , looks really like zelda tileset , old one though.
@holder: very nice , animation looks smooth, the one i like the best is when it shoot, it shows light from the gun.
cant wait to see it implement on a game.

[Yuu-Mon Musuedo]

I need some feedback on the character's portrait before I start making the clothes. I can't draw so what I did was copy & paste, erase, resize, drew a bit, and recolor. I did what I could do. I used someone's character portrait template, and a face maker by FoxRichards. Do you think I overdid it with the hair? Trying to make a Japanese fashion Ganguro with a blond anime afro.

A new screenshot from my bumpmap script- I tried it with different sorts of (modified) RTP textures... as I can't boost the performance anymore (realtime will never happen T.T), I will next work on a script for Voxel like fog ;)

Nice, this is pretty good. Loving the glare effect on the tiles. You made look 3D.

[akura]

Heres a more detailed town i'm doing ^^

*Ignore the Empty space that's going to be filed in later*



THIS IS FOR RPG MAKER VX

This post has been edited by akura: Mar 4 2012, 01:18 PM

[supercow]

@yuu-mon-musuedo : yeah, the hair looks weird it looks like a peacock

[kayden997]

@akura
It's quite confusing at the moment tbh. It looks great tho.

@Yuu-Mon Musuedo
Aim for Afro

@Resource Dragon
Wonderful work. You really captured that 'old style' look.

@-dah0rst-
Maybe just one direct light source would look even better. I can say that it looks interesting.

My Work In Progress

[akura]

@akura
It's quite confusing at the moment tbh. It looks great tho.

@Yuu-Mon Musuedo
Aim for Afro

@Resource Dragon
Wonderful work. You really captured that 'old style' look.

@-dah0rst-
Maybe just one direct light source would look even better. I can say that it looks interesting.

My Work In Progress

THANK YOU = D btw I released it for people to use ^^

[kayden997]

The boots seem off too me

[AbsoluteIce]

Thoughts on this Kaduki battler?
I made the clothes and hair from scratch.

Attached File(s)

 _kadukitest.png ( 9.04K ) Number of downloads: 0