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Jonnie's WIP's
Welcome all, to my little section of WIP art stuff
I recently Purchased Adobe After Affects, and also download an awesome piece of 3d Software, known as Daz3D so here I am gonna post some bits and pieces here I am also working on my first public story So will post sections of that too (when there is enough of it to make sense)
Crazy Animations
Purple Fire Anim(original)
Re-Made Purple Flame Anim.(with added Green-ness)
For those who have read my About me, you will also know that I write lyrics this is a piece written for Greelinator...Comment and Feedback wanted
Angel in My Darkness
As I wondered through the darkness All hope was gone And in you came, and sealed by fate And made me believe again ======X====== You saved me from the dark And brought me into Light The Angel in my Darkness You took me under your wing And saved me from myself My Angel of Light ======X====== I gave you my heart And you emptied my pain The darkness could never Reclaim it again ======X====== You saved me from the dark And brought me into Light The Angel in my Darkness You took me under your wing And saved me from myself My Angel of Light ======X====== Your wings shield my tortured soul From the torment of the Darkness I am safe, within your arms Those gentle arms protect me ======X====== No matter what I did My soul could be at peace With just the knowledge That you were watching over me ======X====== You saved me from the dark And brought me into Light The Angel in my Darkness You took me under your wing And saved me from myself My Angel of Light ======X====== And even at the end of time My soul will be yours And even at my time of Death I am always in your arms... ======X====== You saved me from the dark And brought me into Light The Angel in my Darkness You took me under your wing And saved me from myself My Angel of Light ======X====== You sealed my fate With just an Angels Touch You saved my life With an Angels Kiss
END
Blockage I
Beginning to lose you Leaving me behind Only you can unlock it Can't you see how much it hurts? Killed the friendship that we had... After all we've been through? Gone? Ever thought what could have stopped it?
Why Can't You See
Hiding Under Covers Hiding In the Dark Thinking and wondering Why did it Start
Thinking about what you did And why you never stopped Do I deserve this pain Do you have a heart?
Why can't you see Things are happening that shouldn't be Help stop this pain Things are happening why can't you see?
I Tried to be perfect really hard it's true But no one can be perfect when it comes to you
You tried to change me That I cannot do.. So once again I run away Because of you...
Why can't you see Things are happening that shouldn't be Help stop this pain Things are happening why can't they see?
(Piano Solo)
Why can't they see Things are happening that shouldn't be Help stop this pain Things are happening why can't they see
It reminds me of the fire animation done in Windows Media Player way back when~ i think you did a good job for you first time and I hope you will be posting an update to it and others soon as you can. It's nice to see someone focusing on stories and animations
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Awesome! Glad to see you are posting stuff here now! =D
Excellent work, by the way. Adobe After Effects is a pretty mean program. It's a little purple, you should now go with something green (to offset the purple, lol). =D
I can't wait to see more stuffs from you - including writing. D=
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QUOTE (Nanashi @ Aug 15 2011, 08:24 PM)
It reminds me of the fire animation done in Windows Media Player way back when~ i think you did a good job for you first time and I hope you will be posting an update to it and others soon as you can. It's nice to see someone focusing on stories and animations
I wasn't sure at first whether to post an animation, It does look abit like WMP lol which is pretty cool as it is lol This is my first from scratch work I did soo I thought it would be interesting to post it
QUOTE (X-M-O @ Aug 15 2011, 11:22 PM)
Awesome! Glad to see you are posting stuff here now! =D
Excellent work, by the way. Adobe After Effects is a pretty mean program. It's a little purple, you should now go with something green (to offset the purple, lol). =D
I can't wait to see more stuffs from you - including writing. D=
I am glad to be here thanks for the lovely welcome
Also you don't have to wait to long on the stories either...because hidden behind the spoiler is one of my newer works, after a VERY long break from storywritting I decided to write a small story about one of the characters for my VX game....
“I always seem to get myself in these situations...” Ren thought to herself, the familiar sound of the Intruder Alarm sent shivers down her spine. She could feel the adrenaline pumping around her body, making her whole body rigid, her heart pounding against her chest; she could hear the shouting of the guards as they made their way towards her. She surveyed the area, trying to find a way out; the guards were inclosing her from both sides. “Trapped” she thought, “Just what I need.” “You are surrounded,” one of the guards stated, “Give yourself up!” Ren glared at him. “Erm...” she paused, “I don’t think so!” “You have no choice!” he retorted “It would be in your best interest, to come with me.”
“I decide what is in my best interest!” Ren growled; her eyes scanning her surroundings to see if she could escape, no matter what she was not going to follow them back again. Just the thought of following them back again made her blood turn cold. She turned away from the guard and took a deep breath. She was NOT going back there...no matter what she had to do.
“Come with us!” the other guard said harshly, “This is your final warning” She swivelled around...” What! “, she yelled, “Are you warning me!” The guard stared blankly at her; he had no idea who he was dealing with! “You’re new aren’t you?” she enquired, “What’s it to you?!” the guard retorted angrily “Well, you don’t really understand how things work around here, do you?” she began “Where do you come from, I haven’t seen you in Brimlad before?” she enquired The guard looked at her. He had been warned about this before; not to reveal anything, one thing and that was it, she could get him to do anything she wanted, he would be an open book for her to just manipulate and rewrite, this made her the most dangerous of all the criminals in Brimlad. He looked directly at her, and could see her grinning intently at him... “You speak so highly of me” she said excitedly “and for that, I am sorry about this...really I am!” She looked directly at him and began to speak rapidly to him, he knew what was coming and yet he couldn’t stop listening, no matter how he tried to fight, he couldn’t look away he kept listening and listening, she sounded like an angel...as if she could fix the world with just her voice. He was mesmerised...and then suddenly It stopped. His eyes were burning, and his whole body felt overcome with fatigue, he yawned, looking around he noticed the other guard staring at him, nursing a bloody nose. “What the hell happened” he yawned “Nusuma...That is what happened!” the guard grumbled “What...What’s that” he asked confused “What happened to you, you imbecile!” he said angrily He went on to explain that Nusuma was a talent certain members of Brimlad were taught when they were younger. “What the hell does it do?” He asked, still confused
Nusuma was a strange a mysterious talent that only certain Blue Mages were blessed with the ability and even fewer that were taught how to use it. It gave the user the ability to not only control the body, but also control the mind. To a Blue Mage confident in Nusuma the mind is like a ball of Clay, malleable and interchangeable to suit the purpose of the Mage... “You never realise it happens until it is too late” the guard sighed, “Come on, James” he said addressing the still bewildered guard, “There is no point standing around here, she’s probably long gone!”
The guard and James slowly rose to their feet. “Bior Heachd” James chanted; water rose from the ground and took the shape of a hand as it washed the blood from his face. He looked around and just for a moment he thought he saw a glint coming from the shadows...
This post has been edited by Jonnie19: Aug 15 2011, 07:20 PM
That was really well done animations. Can you draw at all? If so, I'm sure you could do a good job making a small movie ^^
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and now I add Lyrics to my dear talent lol A couple of errors later...I think I got most of them now This was written for Greelinator and it is called Angel In My Darkness
Angel in My Darkness
As I wondered through the darkness All hope was gone And in you came, and sealed by fate And made me believe again ======X====== You saved me from the dark And brought me into Light The Angel in my Darkness You took me under your wing And saved me from myself My Angel of Light ======X====== I gave you my heart And you emptied my pain The darkness could never Reclaim it again ======X====== You saved me from the dark And brought me into Light The Angel in my Darkness You took me under your wing And saved me from myself My Angel of Light ======X====== Your wings shield my tortured soul From the torment of the Darkness I am safe, within your arms Those gentle arms protect me ======X====== No matter what I did My soul could be at peace With just the knowledge That you were watching over me ======X====== You saved me from the dark And brought me into Light The Angel in my Darkness You took me under your wing And saved me from myself My Angel of Light ======X====== And even at the end of time My soul will be yours And even at my time of Death I am always in your arms... ======X====== You saved me from the dark And brought me into Light The Angel in my Darkness You took me under your wing And saved me from myself My Angel of Light ======X====== You sealed my fate With just an Angels Touch You saved my life With an Angels Kiss
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Comment and feedback appreciated
This post has been edited by Jonnie19: Aug 24 2011, 01:10 PM
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A small bump with a very small Acrostic added....based on the breakdown of a strong friendship; something written in the space of 10mins Feedback would be brilliant
Blockage I
Beginning to lose you Leaving me behind Only you can unlock it Can't you see how much it hurts? Killed the friendship that we had... After all we've been through? Gone? Ever thought what could have stopped it?
AND..... During my younger years, I wrote a song called Why Can't You See. This song can have audio with it, however will not add unless someone requests it, because it desperately needs re recording
Why Can't You See
Hiding Under Covers Hiding In the Dark Thinking and wondering Why did it Start
Thinking about what you did And why you never stopped Do I deserve this pain Do you have a heart?
Why can't you see Things are happening that shouldn't be Help stop this pain Things are happening why can't you see?
I Tried to be perfect really hard it's true But no one can be perfect when it comes to you
You tried to change me That I cannot do.. So once again I run away Because of you...
Why can't you see Things are happening that shouldn't be Help stop this pain Things are happening why can't they see?
(Piano Solo)
Why can't they see Things are happening that shouldn't be Help stop this pain Things are happening why can't they see
BUT WAIT....THERE'S MORE
Back when I had...shorter hair and when I got to use my dear lil sisters room for recording I did my Tribute...to the Tenacious D hit....Tribute and Amerk recently asked me to show off some of my covers that I have done.....so here it is
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Not bad, not bad at all. =D The Tribute had be a little worried, but then I noticed you were in your sister's room. (Jokes.)
Your lyrics are meaningful, which is necessary in good lyrics, so your lyrics are good.
One thing to note is that "loose" (meaning "release") is spelled correctly, but it seems to be the wrong word. I think you meant "lose" (meaning "mislay"). Moose, loose; ooze, lose.
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Thanks for your feedback as always great to receive feedback I've lost your correction on Loose vs Lose I cannot seem to find my error what piece of art is this in? I used the CTRL+ F function and could only find what you wrote
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Can Chart music be mashed up with timeless classics...that is the investigation that I took when a group of my college mates made a comment about two tracks...
One of my mates decided that they would sound very interesting together...so I decided feck it...let's give it ago Soo.... here is the result of my WIP piece combining the two....I present "I'm Star Wars and I know it"
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All right, what you have here is a really great idea, and good implementation, but perhaps a little bit of seamlessness would work better. =] I don't know if you have the ability to recreate the original soundtracks, but you almost need to. My suggestion would be, if you really want to make the experiment a success, to recreate both songs (minus lyrics, if you don't have a singer) and instead of switching from one to the other (and only overlaying a couple parts) the Cantina music should be throughout the song as an underlying tune to make it more seamless. It sounds great, for having pieced together music that wasn't originally made to be put together, but if you really want to make it a stand-alone song that combines the two songs seamlessly, then you'll need to recreate them and play them together from start to finish. (Hope that makes some sense, lol.)
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That sounds a brilliant idea....X-M-O, it was made in a few hours, with just a little spare time, I think it's very possible to recreate the entire track Will take some time; but it's do-able.
What surprises me most of all, is the fact that although from two different era's of time, it still has a subtle link together, and although only roughly squished together in a few hours, it still works (although very rough around the edges..) but revamping the track...would be interesting and most likely create an amazing piece of music Thanks for the help
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