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drei7717
post Mar 18 2013, 04:52 PM
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Alright, I kinda suck at explaining stories so try to bare with me. Okay, so it's year 2012 and strange things have been happening. People believe it's the end of the world since December 21st is near. But at this point many people are getting strange powers. People around the world are levitating, pushing things without touching them and shooting energy waves out of their hands. Now there is a young boy who experiences the same thing, well...at least not yet that it. His name is Tei (You can give him a name). One day Tei and his friends were hanging out, then towards the after noon, Tei's best friend Roger's sister gets kidnapped by a monster and was brought into the forest of their town. So Tei and his friends went into the forest to save Roger's sister. Once they met up with the monster, they tried to fight the monster but was defeated. When the monster tries to kill his friend he gets furious, that's when Tei's power awakens. He uses his powers to defeat the monster. But then a man appears before his eyes, telling Tei that he must travel the world to meet with the 5 ascended masters. Once he meets each ascended master they will increase his psychic abilities.



Tei

Age: 14
Nationality: Jamaican-American
Psychic Abilities: Attack Magic
Personality: Tei is a very hot headed, stubborn, and bratty kid. He usually gets into a lot of fights, argues with his sister a lot, and keep certain amount of people in his circle. But Tei is actually really kind in a way. When he travels Tei will learn to become a better person.

Mia

Age: 15
Nationality: French-American
Psychic Abilities: None
Personality: Mia is a very sweet and kind girl. Most people would think that she's very bratty because her parents are really wealthy but she really isn't. But if you get on her bad side she won't hesitate to snap. Her and Tei have been friends almost her whole life. She also lost her older brother in a motor cycle accident.

Roger:

Age 14
Nationality: American
Psychic Abilities: None
Personality: Roger is a hot head as well but not as bad as Tei. Roger and Tei were rivals since the day they met. But other than that Roger is a pretty laid back kid.

Summer

Age: 10
Nationality: American
Psychic Abilities: None
Personality: Summer is Rogers younger sister and was the one who got kidnapped by the monster. Summer has a crush on Tei and constantly flirts with Tei whenever she see's him (Mia tends to get jealous). But other than that Summer is a cry baby, she crys whenever things don't go her way, when people get angry at her, and for no damn reason! She usually tries to act tough when she's around Tei though.

Layla:

Age: 17
Nationality: Jamaican-American
Psychic Abilities: None
Personality: Layla is Tei's older sister. Tei and Layla constantly argue and fight, weather its to play around are seriously do so. They may fight a lot but Layla loves Tei. She would support him if she has too or give him advice when he needs it. Besides all that Layla is that type of girl that does what ever is cool, weather she wants to or not.

Dana

Age: 40s
Nationality: Jamaican
Personality: Dana Is Tei's and Layla's Mother, she cares for them and loves them more than anything. She usually jokes around with her kids, she does that so they have a very strong relationship with each other. Dana is a very nice mother but doesn't take crap from Tei or Layla when they do something stupid



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My art is not meant to look good, It's a cartoon lol











Music and Mapping done by Me
Graphics done by Lunarea and Enterbrain
Scripts by Moghunter




Ver. 2.0
http://www.mediafire.com/?lfrmfaam3c7c4sm



Other than that

Guys I plan on taking this game really far, as far as possible. I don't know maybe make it into an android app (if possible) or onto a handheld. So if anyone would want to help me take this game further, critisizm is much needed, also if you want to be a part of this project as well please email me at drei7717@gmail.com (I wouldn't pm me here because I rarely check my messages) but yeah if you would like to help that would be really helpful
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post Mar 23 2013, 12:02 PM
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O.M.G., black people. O_O BD Right on!

Srsly, im impressed by that haha. The only rpgmaker games i know w/ black ppl are this one and the ones i havent completed. My sister doesnt even usually have black people. Its pretty bad, lol.


But yea! I might help depending on how ur game's development progresses. There r a lot of rpgmaker games that just arent completed/ disappear, if u know what i mean.
U prolly might want to fix some of the verb tenses under "Story" though. And maybe work on just how the sentences flow in general there, i guess.
Ur artwork is cute btw. :-) (thats a good thing.)


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drei7717
post Apr 8 2013, 07:48 PM
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QUOTE (Magical_RuNE_Knight2001 @ Mar 23 2013, 01:02 PM) *
O.M.G., black people. O_O BD Right on!

Srsly, im impressed by that haha. The only rpgmaker games i know w/ black ppl are this one and the ones i havent completed. My sister doesnt even usually have black people. Its pretty bad, lol.


But yea! I might help depending on how ur game's development progresses. There r a lot of rpgmaker games that just arent completed/ disappear, if u know what i mean.
U prolly might want to fix some of the verb tenses under "Story" though. And maybe work on just how the sentences flow in general there, i guess.
Ur artwork is cute btw. :-) (thats a good thing.)

LOL so true, I don't think I played any rpg maker games with a black protagonist lol. But yeah I'm still working on the game though.

and thanks for the compliment on my art work lol tongue.gif
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