This is just killing me. What the hell kind of fight sequence is this? I would have even preferred the defeualt battle effects over this.
Your storyline and characters are as descriptive as the instruction booklet of Super Mario Bros. 2. That is, it's barely informative.
What's the hero's personality, history, etc.? What about the rest of them? Oh and seriously, "Kidnapper" and "Grunt"? I can't see why you didn't bother to name them.
The only excuse I see you have for this is that you want gameplay to be a focus, but it doesn't even look like you even thought much about creating a fun, unique type of game to begin with. Aside from the battle script, everything looks pretty default and bland.
Keep in mind, however, that this is only my first impression, to which you've already set to be bad with your spelling/grammar mistakes, lack of a description on features and story, and overall just a bland presentation.
In addition, there is something I don't understand about your story from the start: The forest this takes place is imaginary
? Are the characters all dreaming this, or what?