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[Gospel Knight]

I hope it;s okay to bump this with a double post, since it has been three days since the last post. I figured out what the problem was with my sprite! It needed an extra frame to give the appearance of wind. So now, as my second frame, it looks like the wind picks it up, then in the fourth frame, you can see where the wind drops, and his clothing drifts down. It's really surprising how much that one frame made a difference!

C&C Please!

Attached File(s)

 IdleAnim.gif ( 4.27K ) Number of downloads: 2

 

[Rukiri]

I can't see anything wrong nor offer a suggestion, maybe AA then yellow stripe?
So much detail you can put into small sprites^O^

This post has been edited by Rukiri: Jan 8 2013, 08:28 PM

[Gospel Knight]

I can't see anything wrong nor offer a suggestion, maybe AA then yellow stripe?
So much detail you can put into small sprites^O^

I'll do that, thanks

[kayden997]

Kind of difficult since wind doesn't literally travel like a wall, meaning that some parts would raise more/less than other at different rates.
But putting that aside, it's fair enough that it gets its point across. Well done.

[MissCoriel]

Does this sound well?
I incorporated alot of event editing on this took forever to render:
https://soundcloud.com/evilpickle-music-dep...-where-the-wind

[CircleDrain]

A 15 min bush for a Rpg

[kayden997]

Okay, first of all: how! I want to know your powers!!!!

And it good (like really good) but I don't like how it leans to the left. Other than that... You nailed the colours and shades

[Rukiri]

I've been very busy lately and actually just goofing off for like...oh half a year and just relaxing.

I basically went back fixed up some of my sprites, updated colors and outlines.

enlarged.


Managed to get the top roof/window in the right place, added the door and started on steps and will eventually add the door screen.

Used the noise filter to give everything a textured appearance.

This post has been edited by Rukiri: Feb 24 2013, 05:27 PM

[evindom]

So I while back I got bored and went a little crazy with some scripts I came across. I ended up deciding to build my own RTP similar to that used in Breath of Fire 3. After much experimentation, I opted to make it an isometric tileset to go with MGC's iso engine, because I apparently hate myself and like pain. This is my first working (meaning the map is finished and you can walk around on it...) model. I'm looking for design critique and suggestions on object to improve the look of the set. When I get the whole thing done, I'll release it on the resource forum.

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The map is complete, the people sprites are also complete. The animals are place holders borrowed from Breath of Fire 3.  screen1.png ( 1.64MB ) Number of downloads: 5

A note on credits:Much of the tiles I used are based on work done by other people, including but possibly not limited to: Alisa_Tana, Benben, Evindom, Enterbrain, Campcom, Mack, Inquisitor, and Hanzo. To the best of my knowledge everything I used is publicly available from the original creators. If I have accidentally used someone's work against their will, please let me know and I will immediately correct the problem.

[LaDestitute]

Those tiles look nice. The round bushes look pretty good.



Anyhow, here are some sprites I recently finished for the region of my Pokemon rom hack, MysticAurelian. These are Junnin's obligatory early rodent and bird Pokemon, Chinchul and Chiquail respectively.

Credit of Chiquail and Chinchul goes to the dA fakemon artist MagesPages.

[LaDestitute]

From left to right: Hoppiler, Rollip, Suckeeto, Tuttby, and Coyoco.