Thank you very much for the feedback.
@MrGuy - thanks for the suggestions! However, after considering it carefully, I'm still very hesitant to make changes. I kind of like where the song sits, as I think it fits the song's imaginary purpose. (I created it with a semi-peaceful, snowy scene in mind....a forest, plains, or a town in winter) Not really made to be "listened" to as much as it's meant to be heard, and sit comfortably in the background. It's a tricky balance - make the song interesting but don't let it distract. If this were written strictly for listening, I wouldn't hesitate to shake things up.
@sewnsew: I'm glad you enjoy my music! You can use any music that is not in the Gai's Hunters soundtrack for non-commercial projects. I think I've disabled downloads for most of those. ("A Dream in the Breeze" might not be disabled, but it IS part of Gai's Hunters) Anything else, go right ahead and use it in any free hobby project. For anything that's going to be sold for a profit, I would ask for payment (and I'd ask to create new, original music for it

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I hope I'll have more new stuff to post here soon, but I've really really got to finish up a couple tracks for Gai's Hunters this week. Thanks again for the comments!
This post has been edited by Turkwise: Apr 23 2012, 01:11 PM