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Ndoelicious
post Jan 26 2012, 02:05 PM
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QUOTE (X-M-O @ Jan 26 2012, 01:38 AM) *
Well, you could include just one image in your gallery that tells people where the edits come from; but if they are only edits to the RTP most people will already know that.
You could also name the file "VXRTPEdit_001.jpg" for example. =]

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Oh okay...cause I mostly only edit the eyes and mouth...
other than that, its going to get tough,since i dont have any tablet to begin with T_T

(no dude? gomen~ are you just a teen...or an old man?) lol xD


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post Jan 27 2012, 10:30 AM
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Editing without a tablet isn't always difficult, it just depends on how much you're editing the faces.
If you're just doing recolours, then it really isn't that difficult to simply use the mouse (with Photoshop or similar software), but redrawing the eyes and mouth can be a little tricky with the mouse (certainly doable though). ^^

(Neither, lol. I'm not a guy at all.)


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post Jan 27 2012, 11:42 AM
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QUOTE (X-M-O @ Jan 27 2012, 11:30 AM) *
Editing without a tablet isn't always difficult, it just depends on how much you're editing the faces.
If you're just doing recolours, then it really isn't that difficult to simply use the mouse (with Photoshop or similar software), but redrawing the eyes and mouth can be a little tricky with the mouse (certainly doable though). ^^

(Neither, lol. I'm not a guy at all.)


But tablet is waaay better than traditional arts! Like when i join Tinierme contest, someone lacking the digital art will always be the loser..even if the traditional art is waay better(not talking about mine though) smile.gif
Does this even relates to the topic? *kicked

I want to do it like pros..making drawings from the raw..total raw! more originals and less credits to other artist ryt? ^^


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post Jan 27 2012, 12:16 PM
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Yeah, that's the way to go because then you could post them up without any problems. ^^

It's the Critique Thread, so it is getting off topic with a discussion about art.

Activity is nice, but let's get some members posting their work(s) up for Critique! happy.gif
(Remember: art, music, etc. is all accepted as a resource and can be placed in this thread for critique.)


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post Jan 27 2012, 12:40 PM
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Yeah, but still, we need to edit them before we're gonna post it.
I think I gotta make one..
though its still impossible to do it from raw material.
Does SquarEnix or NIS can also be the one we're crediting?


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post Jan 27 2012, 12:52 PM
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Yes, you should credit whoever you get the original material from. =]


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post Jan 30 2012, 03:24 PM
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hey guys, im back again with a new song. Just like b4 i continued with the experiment. But the next one is probably gonna be the metal/rock type lol i have made one in a while

http://youtu.be/0W7CuGV1VaI


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post Feb 1 2012, 07:52 AM
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I need your perspective on this battler..
I made it with GIMP, which i'm fairly quite new at..
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Attached File  test2.JPG ( 79.47K ) Number of downloads: 4
 


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post Feb 4 2012, 11:45 PM
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http://soundcloud.com/evilpickle-music-dept/the-warbringer
This is for my personal game and not for use in others.. it is 100% original for my use
This is the normal battle theme for my game.. Comments?
Edit: Fixed some muddy sounds

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post Feb 5 2012, 11:13 PM
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So this is not a resource but what ever, were mixing it all up....

This is a mock up for a game I'm designing in adobe air. Its not final, its a long way off. Bla bla bla



Monster and Planes (plains - fail at spelling) would be drop down lists, anything in blue is a "link" which opens a pop up window.

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post Feb 6 2012, 01:43 PM
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Can i post screens here right?
Btw, new screen of my game smile.gif

Translation: Shimon, how many days does it take to get to Masyaf? It is now more than a week we travel ...


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post Feb 6 2012, 03:46 PM
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QUOTE (Saul95 @ Feb 6 2012, 01:43 PM) *
Can i post screens here right?
Btw, new screen of my game smile.gif

Translation: Shimon, how many days does it take to get to Masyaf? It is now more than a week we travel ...


Looks good, I especially like your lighting effects.
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post Feb 6 2012, 04:56 PM
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@gananr : i think it has potential , give it some shadow for the clothes and source of light. ...
the only thing that really stand out is the lack of shadow for the clothes really .

@hobogames : i have to say for rm2k3 that map is better than xp/vx map ive seen.
for 1st map , maybe you can make it so the wall like this?
*edit*: on second look, that wall should reach bottom, sorry my mistake, perhaps should make it 1 tile smaller sweat.gif
map 1

btw did you put a tree in the water?


@saul95 : nice, very nice, its got the right atmosphere of bright sunshine.

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post Feb 6 2012, 05:47 PM
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QUOTE (Saul95 @ Feb 6 2012, 02:43 PM) *
Can i post screens here right?
Btw, new screen of my game smile.gif

Translation: Shimon, how many days does it take to get to Masyaf? It is now more than a week we travel ...


whoaa..its great happy.gif


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post Feb 11 2012, 11:30 AM
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Thanks to all for comments smile.gif
Lately I'm working a little 'to pixel art, so I tried to edit some chara.




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@Saul95
Wow *blink blink*... Wow! That is really good! It's like it was meant to be in he RTP.
Great job man!
Also, the first down frame of the little girl... She's cheering!

Your desert scene is amazing work as well.
Keep up the good work.


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post Feb 12 2012, 09:48 AM
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@Saul95: That map is really good. XP graphics are pretty amazing.

This is a little farm map I've been working on. I know there's too many trees at the bottom, and I was going to fix them by adding some cliffs.
Farm Map


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post Feb 12 2012, 10:26 AM
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@CWCprime : i think you need to think more of your map , i mean the condition of it....if its a farm would the grass be so smooth everywhere? and the area around farm had perfect grass? i dont use vx , but i think it lacks realism.
1.i think it would look better if the ground in the area is soil and add few grass growing here and there.
2.for fence around stock animal , edit it so it show that people can open and enter it.
3.build small house/ coop for the chicken & stock animal , usualy it made near the house.
4.you dont really need to fence everything around the house (your choice though) , the only immidiate need is the life stock so they wont run / get attacked.
5.theres log around , maybe make a few of the tree around cutted?
6.i dont see any problem with that amount of tree , its not like the player can see whole map right?

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post Feb 15 2012, 05:34 AM
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Can we post videos here to?

The Magnus Legend(Teaser)


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Wow, very good trailer obsorber!!


Some pilot maps ( not interally finished yet ^^):




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