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> [Art] Critics will always be helpful ^^
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post Oct 11 2012, 01:59 PM
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Yes, I suppose you could consider it to be Halloween themed. happy.gif
I still want to see pumpkins though. tongue.gif


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post Oct 11 2012, 02:37 PM
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I know, pumpkins might work and spice things up a bit.
I've seen people posting sprites with pumpkin head as well ^^,

Oh and about that signature pic of yours...is that your doll? Cuz it's so cuuute!!!


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post Oct 11 2012, 02:44 PM
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I wish I could knit like that! O_O
Nope, it's not mine. I got it from online, but I put some stuffs together so that it ends up working as a single image. ^^


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post Oct 11 2012, 03:05 PM
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If you think yourself a woman, then knitting is a must *shot
I see, like the BG, right?

All I have in mind about pumpkins is the Blair witch~ :3


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post Oct 11 2012, 05:54 PM
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ohmy.gif
Just because I'm a lady, doesn't mean that I have to be able to knit. ><


Actually, the BG and the dolls are both from the same set of images, I just mixed them together. ^^


Yes! Do the Blair witch! =D


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post Oct 11 2012, 09:18 PM
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Eh? So you're saying that you only made that 'Happy Halloween RRR' ?? biggrin.gif

I'm gonna trying something other too though~ ^^
Prepare your eyes, miss X-M-O~


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post Oct 12 2012, 03:16 PM
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Yes, when I do my own signatures I will commonly just go with things that I already like instead of making new things. tongue.gif
I don't usually have the time to design completely original content, however when I make things for RRR (like banners/awards/etc.) they are usually completely original.
If I had more time, I would make loads of graphics just for the sake of it because it's one of the only things that I consider myself to be good at in visual art. D=

All right, you try whatever you think is best and I'll just have to wait and see. happy.gif


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post Oct 12 2012, 03:28 PM
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Aww, don't think low of yourself!
Every art is a masterpiece ^^,
Not everyone even know how to make things good with PS, like editing pics and others~

Oh and btw, your wish has been fulfilled ^^,
I add another 2 of drawings, and yeah...no boys...as usual biggrin.gif


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post Oct 13 2012, 02:32 PM
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Your lines are fabulous, they have so much movement. Very smooth. I like your style sir/ma'am *Hand shake* Definitely post more, I demand moar art.


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QUOTE (Homunculus @ Oct 13 2012, 03:32 PM) *
Your lines are fabulous, they have so much movement. Very smooth. I like your style sir/ma'am *Hand shake* Definitely post more, I demand moar art.


I can't say nothing more than a heartful thanks ^^,
I love curves(every living guys do!) and lines, and since lines what makes the motion in the drawings ^^
I have some newer arts for the Halloween contest, I hope you'll like it smile.gif
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and..it's a Sir lol xD


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post Oct 16 2012, 01:41 AM
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It's been quiet for awhile..
Well, Adam and the Eve..



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post Oct 16 2012, 11:00 AM
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Resized for you. ^^

This is great! I love the detail on the "garden". happy.gif


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post Oct 16 2012, 12:56 PM
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I think both pictures look really good.

I love the detail and texture in your work but I feel for what makes up the detail theres a distinct lack of perspective (which I suck at anyways) and foreshortening. They're very artistic and abstract but the inclusion of humans calls critique.

Your anatomy is as mentioned very good but for your most recent picture how the grass has been drawn (lack of bulk and very short) it makes the characters appear shorter than they likely are. The female's anatomy specifically the direction of her head versus the angle of her body does not look correct and the arm placement in perspective should be lower. Adam looks very feminine and could do with some broader shoulders, thicker eyebrows and manlier eyes (but thats me).

Overall I would recommend working on your perspective. Otherwise I really like your detail.

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post Oct 16 2012, 03:49 PM
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QUOTE (Queue @ Oct 16 2012, 01:56 PM) *
I think both pictures look really good.

I love the detail and texture in your work but I feel for what makes up the detail theres a distinct lack of perspective (which I suck at anyways) and foreshortening. They're very artistic and abstract but the inclusion of humans calls critique.

Your anatomy is as mentioned very good but for your most recent picture how the grass has been drawn (lack of bulk and very short) it makes the characters appear shorter than they likely are. The female's anatomy specifically the direction of her head versus the angle of her body does not look correct and the arm placement in perspective should be lower. Adam looks very feminine and could do with some broader shoulders, thicker eyebrows and manlier eyes (but thats me).

Overall I would recommend working on your perspective. Otherwise I really like your detail.


Thank you, qyouqyou >.<

I just love details, which most will never want to touch since it's not even worth admired by the viewers..lol
I did google all of those plants, such as bellflower, red lilly, apple trees, and whatever there are in my garden, I draw them ^^

It's not it's short, but the boy is actually sitting, but not visible(see where his lower chest curved to the back?)
Hmm, thanks for your correction, but for the woman, it's actually a pic I've found earlier, so that's why I'm pretty sure it's correct lol ><
Yeah..the Adam...that's my biggest flaw. I was going to draw two women, but since it'll looks perverted, I had to change to 'Adam and the Eve' theme..which is too late since I've done the details T_T
sorry about that~

Sure, it's been only couple months since I study this kind of arts, your critics are very welcome ^^

QUOTE (X-M-O @ Oct 16 2012, 12:00 PM) *
Resized for you. ^^

This is great! I love the detail on the "garden". happy.gif


Thanks on the usual resize...since whenever I tried to, it fails and the pic doesn't appear T_T
Garden of heaven...well, there's no such clothes on Heaven, right? ^^


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post Nov 10 2012, 01:57 PM
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Talking about zombies >w<
Here's another one : Walking Dead season!
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Oh wow, very detailed and creepy! ohmy.gif
Excellent work. ^^
(What's "Rolling Stones" about?)


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post Nov 11 2012, 02:44 AM
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Cool, thanks ^^
Rolling Stones is umm..a band and also a famous music magazine ^^
Mick Jagger, don't you know him? xD


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post Apr 19 2013, 11:30 AM
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Finally have some times...Anyway, can I make you guys something as well? T-T


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Hello! I like the semi-realism style you have going here. The amount of detail you put into the backgrounds of your pictures is very nice, and easily delineates itself from the foreground. The problem I see is that you have a lot of different perspectives going on at once! In the last picture you posted, for example, the bridges and the left side buildings indicate that we are looking up from the woman in front, but the building on the right implies that we're looking straight-sideways, and the temple behind her makes it look the perspective is going down! Learning about perspective and incorporating it into your work can make a really nice, cohesive picture. You have a lot of talent, but I think perspective will help you a lot!


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QUOTE (Genten @ Apr 19 2013, 08:00 PM) *
Hello! I like the semi-realism style you have going here. The amount of detail you put into the backgrounds of your pictures is very nice, and easily delineates itself from the foreground. The problem I see is that you have a lot of different perspectives going on at once! In the last picture you posted, for example, the bridges and the left side buildings indicate that we are looking up from the woman in front, but the building on the right implies that we're looking straight-sideways, and the temple behind her makes it look the perspective is going down! Learning about perspective and incorporating it into your work can make a really nice, cohesive picture. You have a lot of talent, but I think perspective will help you a lot!


Hahaha, I know I know..I didn't use any eraser and ruler so that's why I can't fix what I messed up. It was barely a drawing out of boredom before I went to sleep smile.gif
Thanks for telling me, I'll try to improve in my perspective anyway, I have a lot to learn. Thanks for coming by happy.gif


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