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So, it's drama you want?
Anyway, now that you've coloured the hand I can give more critique on it. =D The hypothenor needs to be more concave than the thenor (the palm needs to not bulge out further than the area of the hand below the thumb). When you put your hand out like that, the thenor is more visible from the viewer's angle and is almost aligned with the hypothenor. (This image will explain the parts of the hand that I'm talking about, if you need a reference.)
Hope that helps. ^^
Oh, and I like the "shiny" that you added to her cheeks/shoulder/elbow; it looks cute.
To put simply, it's like an art done for girls magazine! But don't take me wrong, it's a good one. Boys will also enjoy this kind of drawing ^^, since it's well drawn ^^, ANyway, do you use PS or SAI?
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You could name the Cielmer... Celianna!
I love the pixel version! ^^ I would recommend, though, that her neck be a little further back than what it is (its position makes her left shoulder - the right part of the image - look rather stretched). =]
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Her legs seem a bit off proportion in terms of length. But other then that, it look great. I really like the hair, so detailed. Now if only I could understand how to draw hair, life would be perfect.