Paragon, Game Story Options

[NerdiGaming]

Hello RPG RPG Revolution,

I have been working on my game (as is everyone else) for RPG Maker VX Ace and it's coming along well. Today, I would like some comments and criticism on the story for my game. I have attached the word document since it's easier to read then copying it into this post, let me know if there are any issues with the download.

Story - Word Document Download

I am looking forward to your replies and please let me know if there are any inconsistencies or confusion through out the story. There are a few things that need to be explained though.

At the beginning of the game, you choose one of six characters, through out the game you run into the rest of the characters which join your party. In the story I have named them Paragon 1-6 as the actual character name will change depending on which character was first chosen. The image and name of the character is seperate from the personality, they are interchangable, if that makes sense.

The scene names listed are not important, they are there to make it easier for my to split up the story.

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Thank you.

This post has been edited by NerdiGaming: Nov 15 2012, 07:25 PM