@bacon, thanks so much for the advice and all. I really wish I had the time that I used to -sitting and drawing was what I used to do almost 24-7. Now though my free time is massively limited so I try to find a fast track way to completing things or they end up getting left.
This is meant to be a non-typical thin yet massive busty character, I kinda wanted a bit of weight on her (hence the slight love handles
You're totally right about the pose those, in fact on most of my work (Art & Pixel) I can't do dynamic poses, but I am trying off screen. Reason for this being static is because I hope to use it as a face/bust graphic for the game, but I know I need to try to use flow lines or even anything to help me get a more relaxed or flexible pose going, even different angles.
Cheers for taking the time to do that and I love receiving critique like that, even if I know I may not be able to correct the things right away I know it's something I should try to focus on and repeat over and over to test new and different things.
Almost finished, leaving it for now till I can get the skill to correct the errors (Hair highlight and Bust shading):