Ah, British English. I majored in European English Literature (in America) and taught English/reading/writing (also in America). Some rules are a little different. Join the first and second sentence with a comma. I also agree that the white text doesn't look right on the light tiles, and the credits with the map scrolling goes on a little too long. Good job though!
QUOTE (steve09424 @ Apr 23 2012, 05:46 AM)
Thanks for your comments! The software I used to capture it was Microsoft Expression.
I did deliberate for a good few minutes if it was 'is' or 'are' when I typed it, turns out that it can be either in my accent >_> Good job you spotted beginning!
One problem I do have with creating games is creating dialogue and text that, while informative and interesting, doesn't give away too much information to begin with. I still need to find that right balance that I would be happy with, as a developer and a player.