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[nichodo]

Well this is an RP for my game Final Fantasy; Dark Prophecy.

http://www.rpgrevolution.com/forums/index....showtopic=48322
The link to the games topic.

Why did I make this?

Because I wanted other people to take the matter into their hands on what to do with it.

The Story:
The Game and RP is set in the acasta universe that is an uncharted place in the whole galaxy.
And is set on the planet of Gaia.

Before Humans arrived on the planet of Gaia they lived on the Game's and RP's Planet Earth.
Before this Earth ripped itself apart. They set out to explore the galaxy and when they learned that their
Earth had ended its life cycle they set out for the acasta universe where they settled on the planet of Gaia.

Planet Gaia has had towns. Castles. Kingdoms and cities
built on it but they were destroyed in an war that killed the ones that were living there.
The ones that survived moved to the other planet where they became elves.
Planet Gaia was just like planet earth.

The Vampires are a race that by their default lived by drinking human
blood but they used spaceships to travel to earth to kidnap humans.
They thrived on their planet witch is kind of like earth but an evil version of earth.
The Vampires calls their planet Vampireca.

The Elves are a race of altered humans that survived the war on Gaia.
One time when they (As Humans) arrived on what would soon be their new home planet.
They found an ancient civilization and learned of the planets name. It was Phantasia.
Them they found an orb that changed them to the elves. Now they build tree houses and walls.

The Gullwings is an organization that was based in the spaceships
but in 100.000 years they will be based in an huge airship with a couple of small airships.
The first time the Gullwings was created it was on planet earth.
But they moved to spaceships. And later airships.

Planet earth just died after several thousands of years.

Locations:
The Gullwings main exploration spaceship.

The whole world of Gaia.

100.000 years later planet of Gaia.

The evil planet of the Vampires.

The Green planet of the Elves.

Sign up sheet
Characters Name: (Any name you can think of)
Characters Age: Any age (Same as above)
Characters Gender: (Male or Female)
Characters Species: (Humans. Vampires or Elves. ETC.)
Characters Appearance: (Clothing)
Characters Personality: (Think about their personality to others)
Characters Background: (Any background)
Characters Relationship: (Him (or Hers) Relationship with other users Characters (Ask them first)

Here's my Character.

Characters Name: Daniel Harold
Characters Age: 23
Characters Gender: Male
Characters Species: Humans
Characters Appearance: Suit with the Gullwings logo on it
Characters Personality: Before he joined the Gullwings
Something happened to his girlfriend that made him want to be more kind and gentle to others.
When he joined the Gullwings he took with him his kind and gentleness.
Characters Background: He Comes from an family who always was rich and famous
He joined the Gullwings to get to know the tradition that his family has to join the Gullwings.
And he got to know that this tradition of his family was created when The Gullwings was created.
After a time of service in the Gullwings he met his sister on the crew.
Characters Relationship: none at the moment.

And here's my 100.000 years later Character.

Characters Name: Daniel Harold (I named this character after the above character)
Characters Age: 23
Characters Gender: Male
Characters Species: Humans
Characters Appearance: Suit with this times Gullwings logo on it
Characters Personality: Same as above.
Characters Background: Same as above but he met his girlfriend on the crew.
And he leaves his family at his nation.
Characters Relationship: none at the moment.

That's how you get on with the two characters.

Well try to think about what your two characters will be.

And tell me what I missed.

This post has been edited by nichodo: Jul 13 2011, 10:44 AM

[Nicsp]

Hello, first and foremost, welcome to the RP forums. Moving on, I am under the impression that is your first time trying to open up an RP, if so, i suggest you to read this useful tutorial by Satou Asahira.

I see you're trying to make an RP based out of a Final Fantasy fangame of your making, while there's nothing against the rules in your post, i doubt you will attract any players with the little information you've put up.

Firstly, i suggest you post here a link to your game's topic, if there is one. Secondly, keep in mind that most likely no one in here has ever played your game, as such, you should try to be as detailed as possible. Describe this Fantasca planet, is it just like Earth? Does it have any major towns alredy? Is it more desertical? Does it have more water instead of land, etc. Why did the Earth rip itself apart? Was it because the planet had simply died out after several thousands of years? Was it some kind of accident by someone? Was it some kind of terrorism by the Vampires or the Elves? What are the Gullwings?

Since i've mentioned the Vampires and Elves, what are they like? Are they just like the "default" ones? Do they have any sort of relationship with humanity alredy? Good or bad? What are THEIR planets like?

These are just some examples of things you could elaborate on. You picked my interest in this because i like the idea of an RP that is played in two different times, but your sign-up will need work if you plan to take this forward.

Also...

Characters Personality: He love to pervert woman.
And he is very kind and gentle with his captain and fellow crew members.
Characters Background: He Comes from an family who always loves perverts.
He joined the Gullwings to get to other woman on the crew.
And to go to other worlds leaving his family behind on earth.
But he met his sister on the crew.

As much as you made me chuckle, you should also elaborate a bit on this and try to explain things a bit better, (If you insist on the pervert thing, remember this forum is PG-13) but in your Personality slot you could try to explain why does he act like that? Did something happen to his previous crew that made him care more for his crew members, maybe? Also, background, since you mentioned his family, what are they like (Other than loving perverts...) are they rich? Are they famous? Do they have a family tradition of joining those Gullwings? How does YOUR character feel about that?

Again, i've typed all of this up because i liked the concept you're trying to use for this RP and i think this could make a nice RP. However, at it's current state, it's unlikely it'll really get any players.

[DarkNesa]

What are the Gullwings?

Allow me to explain. The Gullwings are a group of sphere hunters from Final Fantasy X-2, which main protagonist Yuna joined after finding a sphere containing contents of what she thinks to be her lost love (Tidus, but it's really Shuyin). They are huge rivals with the Leblanc Syndicate, and it isn't until Chapter 2 the two hunter groups ally with each other.

Enough about that though, I don't think it's a good idea to use the Gullwings in this. Unless it's set in Spira, or at least in a world connected to Spira greatly, I wouldn't use the Gullwings. Anyway, whilst I'm here, I might as well sign up.

Characters Name: Svaiyn Horyx

Characters Age: 18

Characters Gender: Male

Characters Species: Magi (A race which can use magic at will. They take the form of an elf and a wolf, however looking more of an elf)

Characters Appearance: He has bright blonde hair, with his hair swurved onto one side. He also has a scar on his head (like Squall's), however much longer than Squall's. Half of his torso is covered by a blue top, leaving the upper left part exposed. He wears a gold, flashy cape, with the symbol of his people: the Magi. Around his legs, he wears dark knight leggings, with pointy boots. The weapon he weilds is the gunblade, with the blade being as thin and long and Sephiroth's (shorter, on the other hand), whilst the hilt of the gunblade is a very pale blue.

Characters Personality: Around others, he is usually the silent type. However, when he is put in a difficult situation, he takes up the role of being leader, slightly raising his ally's suspicion (due to him usually being the silent type).

Characters Background: Svaiyn's family was killed during the War of the Magi, a great civil war of the Magi race. Being one of the last of his people, Svaiyn thrives on life, desperately wanting to share the wisdom of his people. A girl in particular (of whom he fell in love with), Meena took interest into his teachings, and then those two 'clicked'. However, due to circumstances, Meena was taken away by Dark Elves, to be experimented on. Ever since then, Svaiyn has done anything in his power to find Meena, with little success...

Characters Relationship: (All explained above)

[nichodo]

Thank you for creating your character DarkNesa.

Its accepted!

I've also edited the first post to be more in line with the PG-13 thing.

And thank you for explaining the Final Fantasy 10-2s Gullwings.
But the Gullwings that i have in this RP and the game is my version of them.

This post has been edited by nichodo: Jun 9 2011, 01:12 PM